Wednesday 15 November 2017

My poetry

WALA: using poetic devices to help make an idea that the reader can see and feel.

I entered my poem in a competition and I got second in my age group.

Leaves
Small and shriveled like a dried mushroom
old like the mouldy broom
When I’m picked
I snap
Crackle
POP goes my stalk
I go whistling through the wind
settling on the soft silky grass  
Rough
I grew  like that.

1 comment:

  1. Hi Quinn,
    I'm Miki from Panmure Bridge School. This is awesome work. I like your poetry because it very interesting to read. Keep it up!

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Thank you for your positive, thoughtful and helpful comment.